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Re: His Eyes Were of the Ocean
My first post! Yes. Haha. Congrats! Welcome to YWS! Prologue I used to look up into the bright blue sky, see an airplane, and wonder if he was on that ...
Oct 13, 2009 -
Re: Uncontrollable Pain
Alright, so I thought this was pretty melodramatic. A girl is hurting "uncontrollably" because a guy doesn't want her. *lifts eyebrow* Sure, there might be a twinge of heartache, but ...
Oct 11, 2009 -
Re: deleated
I love the idea behind the lyricism, very creative. It is, of course, emo and depressing as every other song out there. But something about your chorus hit me hard. ...
Oct 11, 2009 -
Re: All of the Stars
I have to admit this was a very touching story. It almost brought a tear to my eye. And I'm not a big crier. Congratulations. ;) Some of the phrases ...
Oct 11, 2009